[KI-LC] Group "Join" Form
Roger Martin
roger.martin at corp.aol.com
Tue Jun 30 14:46:08 PDT 2009
Trent,
I've been at an off-site all day and am just now getting to my email.
See my responses embedded below.
rogerM
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J. Trent Adams wrote:
> Roger M. -
>
> This appears to be a great clarification and streamlining of the process
> we were trying to define. I definitely appreciate the time and effort
> you put into carefully preserving the spirit of the prior work, while
> also improving it.
>
> My nits are so minor I feel embarrassed even bringing them up:
>
> 1. The term "Intellectual Property Rights" is
> introduced earlier than the acronym was
> parenthetically defined. Perhaps moving up the
> acronym to the first instance?
>
[RM] oops!! yes, it should be moved up to the first usage
> 2. The term "Follower" is now only referenced in
> the second bullet of Section (6). Perhaps it makes
> sense to eliminate the term from the Definitions
> Section (2) and insert the meaning in (6)?
>
[RM] Good point. I considered this, but decided it was useful to have
the definition. In addition, we should change the fourth bullet in (5)
to read:
* A non-Participant in a Group may subscribe to a Group List as a
Follower. A non-Participant Subscriber has read-only permission
and may not post to the List.
> 3. If we're leveraging defined terms (e.g. Member,
> Participant, etc.) from other Controlling
> Documents, do we need to formally reference
> them in some way? Perhaps by including them
> in the Definitions Section (2), linking a reference
> to the Bylaws and/or Operating Procedures as
> appropriate?
>
[RM] In the Operating Procedures we defined only those needed terms
that had not been defined in the Bylaws. So, I think we should continue
that practice. The reason for doing it that way is to prevent future
conflicts should we change a definition in one document and forget to
change it in another. In the Bylaws we included the following as the
introduction to the Definitions in Section 1:
/Whenever a term defined below is capitalized, it is used as
defined. If the word or /
/phrase does not have leading capital letters, then it is to be
interpreted within the /
/context of the specific text. /
/A capitalized term not defined below is used as defined in the
Organization Bylaws./
[RM] For clarity, we should add the above text to each Policy that we
create that includes definitions.
> 4. In the same vein, if we're referencing externally-
> defined terms, do we need to include the term
> "Participant of a Group" in this document? This
> seems close enough to "Participant" as defined
> in 1.13 of the Bylaws that perhaps we can remove
> the qualifying "of a Group" so they're equivalent?
> Or is there a subtle difference I'm missing?
>
[RM] Good point. Let's delete the definition for "Participant of a
Group".
[RM] However, I think we should leave the usage in the rest of the
document because the policy with respect to a Group list pertains to a
Participant of that specific Group. Otherwise, if we just say
"Participant", then an entity that is a Participant of Group A might
think it has the right to have posting permission for the Group B List
without having signed the Participation Agreement for Group B.
> Let me know what you suggest.
>
> Thanks again,
> Trent
>
>
> Roger Martin wrote:
>
>> I have spent some time reviewing the "Groups Email Discussion List
>> Policy" draft and have rewritten it in what I believe to be an easier
>> to understand and more comprehensive format.
>>
>> I have attached my draft which is based on the following comments and
>> rationale:
>>
>> 1. The Policy needs to address both (1) Joining a Group as a
>> Participant and (2) Subscribing to a List as a Follower. In the
>> current draft these two concepts were intertwined and seemed to
>> be fairly confusing. I have attempted to split these two
>> concepts out into separate sections to the extent possible.
>>
>> 2. The introduction of the term "Contributor" is not needed since
>> "Participant", which is already defined in the Bylaws, is
>> sufficient. I have deleted usage of "Contributor". If we wish
>> to differentiate between Participants who do and do not actually
>> contribute postings to the Group List, then the term may be
>> useful, but personally I do not believe we should be encouraging
>> the concept of being a "passive" participant in a Group by not
>> contributing anything.
>>
>> 3. I propose that all Participants in a Group be automatically
>> Subscribed to the Group List. If a Member has additional
>> representatives who join a Group then they may need to
>> Subscribe, but in my opinion the roster of Participants in a
>> Group should automatically be included on the Group List.
>> Likewise for the BoT and LC lists, those holding a seat on
>> either body should be automatically subscribed to both Lists.
>>
>> I have made other changes to the text as I rearranged it, but I did
>> not intentionally change the meaning of the existing text except as
>> outlined above.
>>
>> I apologize that I do not have the document properly formatted, but I
>> have run out of time and will be in an offsite meeting all day
>> tomorrow. As noted in an earlier email, I do not have edit permission
>> on the online version of the document. I am including it as a PDF and
>> MSWORD file.
>>
>> I am sending it in its current state for consideration and discussion
>> as appropriate.
>>
>> ...rogerM
>>
>>
>>
>> Roger Martin wrote:
>>
>>> Since I do not have "edit" privileges to the "Groups Email Discussion
>>> List Policy" and because I feel that these issues should be discussed
>>> by the entire list, I was going to posting my recommended changes
>>> (and rationale) to the LC and BoT lists in an email.
>>>
>>> However, after spending some time on rewriting the policy, I have
>>> decided to draft a new version.
>>>
>>> One of the primary difficulties is that while the title of this draft
>>> policy is "Groups Email Discussion List Policy", it actually also
>>> includes, and to some degree confuses, the policy about joining a WG
>>> or DG.
>>>
>>> As a result, I am going to propose restructuring it and renaming it
>>> to be "Policy for Joining Groups and Group Mailing Lists".
>>>
>>> I will post it for consideration as soon as I have completed the
>>> redrafting of the document.
>>>
>>> ....rogerM
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> /--
>>> ******************************************
>>> Roger Martin, Director of Standards
>>> AOL
>>> 22260 Pacific Blvd 41A:A03
>>> Dulles, VA 20166
>>> email: roger.martin at corp.aol.com
>>> AIM: rjmartin99
>>> phone: 703-265-6203
>>> mobile: 703-389-1547
>>> *******************************************/
>>>
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